When you are having growing pains and are mad
at the world do not go on Facebook and rant. If you do your aunt who is a
school teacher may just correct it
I AM TIRED OF FAMILY AND
PEOPLE TELLING ME WHAT I CAN OR CAN NOT DO IF I WANT TO GO SOME WERE I AM GOING
TO GO THERE IF I WANT TO GO TO SCHOOL IN A DIFFERENT F&*%ING COUNTRY I WILL
THE NEXT PERSON TO PUT ME DOWN AND TALK DOWN TO ME SO HELP ME GOD I WILL GO OFF
THE NEXT PERSON THAT DOES THIS TO ME I WILL END ALL CONTACT WITH EVERY FAMILY
MEMBER I HAVE AND KNOW ONE WILL EVER SEE ANY GRAND CHILDREN OR GREAT GRAND
CHILDREN THE NEXT TIME I PROMISE YOU THE MESSAGE I SEND OR WRIGHT WILL THE BE
THE END OF ALL CONTACT WITH ANY FAMILY SO IN OTHERWERS DO NOT F@#$ WITH ME EVER
AGINE I WILL DO WHAT I WANT TO DO I AM AN ADULT AND IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THAN
GET THE HELL OVER IT THANK YOU AND HAVE A GREAT DAY
I AM TIRED OF FAMILY
AND PEOPLE TELLING ME WHAT I CAN OR (1)CAN NOT DO (2)IF I WANT TO GO (3)SOME
WERE (4) I AM GOING TO GO THERE (5) IF I WANT TO GO TO SCHOOL IN A DIFFERENT
F&*%ING COUNTRY(6) I WILL (7) THE NEXT PERSON TO PUT ME DOWN AND TALK DOWN TO ME
(8) (9) SO HELP ME GOD (10) I WILL GO OFF THE NEXT PERSON THAT DOES THIS TO ME
(11) I WILL END ALL CONTACT WITH EVERY FAMILY MEMBER I HAVE (12) AND (13)KNOW
ONE WILL EVER SEE ANY GRAND CHILDREN OR GREAT GRAND CHILDREN (14) (15) THE NEXT
TIME (16) I PROMISE YOU THE MESSAGE I SEND OR (17)WRIGHT WILL THE BE THE END OF
ALL CONTACT WITH ANY FAMILY (18) SO IN (19) OTHERWERS (20) DO NOT F@#$ WITH ME
EVER (21)AGINE (22) I WILL DO WHAT I WANT TO DO (23) I AM AN ADULT (24) AND IF
YOU DONT LIKE IT (25) THAN GET THE HELL OVER IT (26) THANK YOU AND HAVE A GREAT
DAY (27)
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