Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Please grandchildren THINK before you rant

When you are having growing pains and are mad at the world do not go on Facebook and rant. If you do your aunt who is a school teacher may just correct it

I AM TIRED OF FAMILY AND PEOPLE TELLING ME WHAT I CAN OR CAN NOT DO IF I WANT TO GO SOME WERE I AM GOING TO GO THERE IF I WANT TO GO TO SCHOOL IN A DIFFERENT F&*%ING COUNTRY I WILL THE NEXT PERSON TO PUT ME DOWN AND TALK DOWN TO ME SO HELP ME GOD I WILL GO OFF THE NEXT PERSON THAT DOES THIS TO ME I WILL END ALL CONTACT WITH EVERY FAMILY MEMBER I HAVE AND KNOW ONE WILL EVER SEE ANY GRAND CHILDREN OR GREAT GRAND CHILDREN THE NEXT TIME I PROMISE YOU THE MESSAGE I SEND OR WRIGHT WILL THE BE THE END OF ALL CONTACT WITH ANY FAMILY SO IN OTHERWERS DO NOT F@#$ WITH ME EVER AGINE I WILL DO WHAT I WANT TO DO I AM AN ADULT AND IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THAN GET THE HELL OVER IT THANK YOU AND HAVE A GREAT DAY

I AM TIRED OF FAMILY AND PEOPLE TELLING ME WHAT I CAN OR (1)CAN NOT DO (2)IF I WANT TO GO (3)SOME WERE (4) I AM GOING TO GO THERE (5) IF I WANT TO GO TO SCHOOL IN A DIFFERENT F&*%ING COUNTRY(6) I WILL (7) THE NEXT PERSON TO PUT ME DOWN AND TALK DOWN TO ME (8) (9) SO HELP ME GOD (10) I WILL GO OFF THE NEXT PERSON THAT DOES THIS TO ME (11) I WILL END ALL CONTACT WITH EVERY FAMILY MEMBER I HAVE (12) AND (13)KNOW ONE WILL EVER SEE ANY GRAND CHILDREN OR GREAT GRAND CHILDREN (14) (15) THE NEXT TIME (16) I PROMISE YOU THE MESSAGE I SEND OR (17)WRIGHT WILL THE BE THE END OF ALL CONTACT WITH ANY FAMILY (18) SO IN (19) OTHERWERS (20) DO NOT F@#$ WITH ME EVER (21)AGINE (22) I WILL DO WHAT I WANT TO DO (23) I AM AN ADULT (24) AND IF YOU DONT LIKE IT (25) THAN GET THE HELL OVER IT (26) THANK YOU AND HAVE A GREAT DAY (27)
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